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A Straight-line Plan
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Let me explain how this worked for professional speaker Ruth Kay Petersen of Denver in the process of writing an article for a magazine called Step Into Success.
Ruth Kay had lots of existing material to work from — her promotional brochure, two issues of her newsletter, several articles, her booklet Fun Stuff to Keep You Laughing, and her presentations. First, we had to decide which existing elements of her materials “fit” the needs of this magazine, its readers, and the editor’s current requirements.
Because it was the first time we worked with this publication, we dealt with several unknowns. We researched the editor's expectations for this article, specifically the time line, number of words, and delivery method (fax, e-mail, disk, etc.). The article had to be a 1000-word piece, sent via disk (saved in MS Word) within six weeks; it would be published three months later.
Next, we defined the five steps of the straight-line plan and worked through the first
four before we wrote a single word. They are:
These questions provided a starting point in the writing process:
We learned that the majority of Step Into Success readers are women in direct sales who have a wide variety of experience, often coaching others in their organization. This publication provides inspiration and fresh ideas to help them stay motivated in their sales jobs.
This question kept us on a straight-line path toward setting the right message for the article: What do we want the audience to think, do, believe, or remember as a result of reading this piece?
Ruth Kay wanted the readers—both aspiring and experienced sales people—to see the value of using laughter in their everyday interactions. She wrote her article to provide 10 outrageously fun ways to “Add Laughter to Your Sales Success” (also the title). As a result of reading the article, sales people would step up the “enjoyment” aspects of their jobs and reap rewards for doing so.
Working with a theme encourages writers to play with our fabulously rich language and give an article more personality. Be aware that the theme is the imaginative pathway leading to an article’s message, but not the message itself. The message has the power; the theme adds color and clarity.
Ruth Kay settled on “laughter is powerful” as a theme. In both her writing and speaking, she is a master of outrageous hyperbole, achieved by telling embarrassing stories and turning them into kernels of wisdom. That part of her personality needed to show up creatively and clearly in the article.
Once we clarified the message and theme, we paid attention to the tone and style of articles currently being published in Step Into Success. Before we worked on the first draft, we asked these questions:
Carefully study articles already published, then echo their style elements to achieve the tone that works for the specific target audience.
Before sending her masterpiece to the editor, Ruth Kay gave her article to some sales people who face the challenge of staying inspired. In addition to getting their general reaction, she asked them to pick out the elements we had built into the article. Could they easily answer these questions from just a quick read?
Their responses provided the answers we were seeking, plus a bonus. They laughed out loud at the humorous scenarios and imaginative ideas.
Clearly this straight-line approach had brought us directly to Ruth Kay's desired destination.
Barbara McNichol of Barbara McNichol Editorial helps authors and entrepreneurs add power and persuasion to their writing. She writes and edits articles, website copy, book proposals, manuscripts and all other documents. Contact Barbara at Editor@BarbaraMcNichol.com.
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